2007년 6월 14일 목요일

Journal Entries ② 



     'The Columbian Exchange' is the influence of exotic species to the ecosystem。  As the exchanging of the continents became active, the damage from the Columbian Exchange is becoming more severe。  Economical loss according to the Columbian Exchange problem is going over trillion won anually。  However, korean government hasn't figued out any method to deal with this problem。  Moreover, they don't even know the actual conditions。   
     Extoic species harms our ecosystem, and they also have strict impact on agriculture and fisheries。  Besides, they also serve as mediations for all the heavy diseases and allergies。  The damages are getting more and more serious as exotic species seems to increase。Therefore we need to come up with some counterplan to solve those problems before we get more loss。
     The first thing to do work out is to know the exact degree of our damage。  And then we need to make a national comprehensive countermeasures like the US and Japan。  In that way, we will be able to regulate the number of increasing exotic species。
     The Columbian Exchange problem has much more serious impact on the earth。 Faster we act, the better for us. Therefore we need to perceive that exotic species are great harms to our ecosystem and execute systems after specifying in law。        

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